tlb wrote:I disagree; because I believe RFC is quite capable of writing the story in a way that makes the SLN less of a paper tiger, but still allows the GA to foil the plan for the RF to take over the remnants of the SL. However this would not fit in the limited number of mainline books, without dropping much of the Firebrand stories in the Verge. Since I expect that Firebrand is intended to be a major part of the "second season", that would be a problem.
However; my main problem with the ineffectual SLN is that the Detweiler Plan intended to force the battle between the SLN and the victor in the Haven Quadrant, with the sides even enough to destroy both. Since the Malign was keeping eyes on the war between Manticore and Haven, it should have been apparent to them that the SLN had been too emasculated and the beginning stages should have been delayed to address the imbalance. That this did not happen, I can only attribute to panic at the events in the Talbot Quadrant after the discovery of the Lynx terminal.
In a perfect universe I'd agree with you:
Both on that DW is capable of writing the SL war in a more complex and nuanced way and in that the Alignment should have done more to help the SL - or delay their plans.
You are also right that the Talbot Quadrant is the in-world reason for the Alignment's hasty actions.
Now I'm coming back to the hook from my first sentence: 'perfect world'
I have written a novel myself (one - only one, not DW's enormously productive output!) and even that much more limited scope has showed me how hard it is for a single person to on the one hand keep a whole in-world system even half-ways logical and on the on the other find the damned time to actually
write even only half of what
could be written.
Yes, the SL war could have been more. Theoretically.
But believe me: there is no way a single writer could have done it. Due to RL time constraints. Family. Health. The 24-hour limit of our days. Etc. You name it. It's not humanly possible. I am eternally astonished how much he
does manage to produce. It's unbelievable already. Don't demand too much, please.
At the end of the day the whole SL war is just a side show. And it needs to be treated as such if DW wants to reach the
real finale in the time available to a single human writer.
Edit: added last paragraph