MaxxQ wrote:Pretty good. I've never been the subject of a story before. Made me laugh, though. Especially the last line.
Glad to hear it. I've been wanting to make a funny about the Solly SD topic since the last time it came up.
MaxxQ wrote:BTW, it's very close to fanfic, which is a bit of a no-no here.
Parody snippet, surely. I don't have enough respect for the universe itself to bother with anything more. No Dyson swarms, star systems aren't in the multi-trillions of population (even Manticore should be a trillion or more, just based on time), poor AI, age extension (not even immortality) took 2000 years, etc. Even the whole Solarian League is just a Kardashev 1.1-1.5 civ.
I get why -- such a story would not have been relatable to readers in 1991 and maybe even now -- but times have changed for me and the HH universe has been feeling stale for a while.
I like the story though (I started reading it about 23 years ago as a teen), which is why I put up with the (from my PoV) silly universe limitations. Did so through worse universes and for worse stories.
MaxxQ wrote:Just kidding. I think this one is fine. Just don't expand on it.
Then it's a lucky thing that, aside from what I've already written, the effort of writing it pretty much maxed out my attention span.