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by Alistair » Sun Aug 14, 2016 8:22 pm | |
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My thoughts:
Dohlar will flip Alverez (army) and Thirsk (Navy) and his sympathetic naval Intendant will see to that. Dohlar may be able to cut some sort of deal to stop its citys getting flattened after the war as punishment for the torture/murder of POWs. What deal that would be I don't know joining the empire as a province? joining Siddarmark? Too hard to tell from here but before people think its too far fetched that Dohlar would become part of the Empire I would say that what makes little sense from a practical sense makes HUGE sense from the inner circle end game plan. That end game is infecting Dohlar with all of the Charis ideas and beleifs and allow Dohlar to be a base to spread to Harchong and the Temple lands and beyond. |
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by DMcCunney » Sun Aug 14, 2016 9:39 pm | |
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Quite possible, thouigh the devil is in the implementation details.
I don't see a need for Dohlor to become a province of the Charisian Empire. One issue against it is geography. The Empire is currently Chisholm, Corisande, Zebediah, Tarot, Emerald, and (Old) Charis. That's a cluster of nations all in one contiguous area, and a natural grouping for such a polity. Dohlor is rather farther afield.* What Charis wants is to break the stronghold of Mother Church. The Charisian Empire is a means to that end. Hahrald of Charis never wanted an empire. He was happy ruling Charis. Hector of Corisande did want one, and had dreams of turning the League of Corisande into what the Charisian Empire became. Cayleb didn't want an empire either, nor did Sharleyan, but saw it as the only way to stand against the Church. Cayleb and Sharleyan added Corisande, Zebediah, Tarot, and Emerald to the flock largely because of strategic necessity. The lines had been drawn, and you were either part of Charis or you were part of Mother Church's alliance. It's why Sharleyan told Irys Corisande couldn't be independent again with Prince Daivyn on the throne. Irys probably already knew that, even if she didn't want to admit it, and Earl Coris certainly knew it. If Corisande were permitted independence, the Church would do everything in its power to snap it up, and almost certainly succeed. But I don't see Cayleb and Sharleyan trying to add more provinces to the Empire. What they have is a coherent unit. I don't think either wants the Empire to eventually include the entire world. When the dust settles after the Jihad, I think Charis will be perfectly with other realms being independent, and their attitude will be "We are now at peace. You used to be enemies, but we'd much rather have you as friends. We'll respect you in your sovereignty if you respect us in ours. Let's sign treaties and start trading for our mutual benefit! Notice how well our provinces are doing since we eliminated trade barriers and encouraged economic development?" Dohlor doesn't need to be a province of Charis to benefit, and Charis doesn't need them to be. They just need to be permanently out of the Jihad and out from under the thumb of Mother Church. And the efforts Dohlor has been making to modernize it's industrial plant to better serve the needs to the Jihad are the sort of things Charis wants to see everybody doing, for the benefit of all Safehold. An incentive for Dohlor will be the possibility of being able to far surpass Desnair in wealth and prosperity, and look down their noses at Desnair's backwardness. "Desnair could do what we've done, but you Desnairian great nobles are all born with your heads up your arses. Tough. That's what you get for being stupid." The reaction of Desnair should be highly amusing. * And speaking of which, a question I'd have for Dunstyn Oliver would be "If you wanted to make the fastest possible blue water capable steamship, how fast could it be?" A major issue the Empire faces is the fact that it spans a large area of ocean. Cayleb and Sharleyan already have the problem of transit times between Cheryath and Tellesburg to meet the constitution mandated requirement of having dual capital cities. Archbishop Michael will face even worse problems in traveling between the realms whose Church he is prelate of. I don't think the spare capacity exists to build them now, but I think fast VIP transports that can shrug off things like hurricanes and get senior Charisians to and from the various parts of the Empire in less time than it currently takes will be a definite need. _______ Dennis |
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by McGuiness » Sun Aug 14, 2016 11:45 pm | |
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Wow Dennis, you have some brilliant insights. And yeah, I was being a bit bloodthirsty when I wrote my original comment. PeterZ and I are pretty much agreed that Gorath won't burn - Ronald has to go, but Cayleb and Sharley need to add the velvet glove, so PeterZ's suggestion that they allow Dohlar to trade with South Harchong (and only South Harchong) makes extremely good sense. I think it makes even better sense if you include my recommendation that rather than burning the RDN, the ICN removes most of the guns from each ship and allows Thirsk to use them as merchant escorts. That keeps his sailors busy, the hatchet gets buried, and we don't see wholesale slaughter from which the two country's relationship could never recover. I'm not convinced exactly how much damage the RDN will have to suffer before Thirsk orders it to surrender. When 100 lb shells start landing around his ships while the KH VIIs are still a mile or two out of range of the RDN's most powerful guns, it becomes blatantly obvious that any combat at all will just get men killed unnecessarily. Plus accounts of the shelling of seaports all along the northern Gulf of Dohlar will have arrived in Gorath long before Thirsk sorties - if he does. His sailors will have heard the rumors, and their desire to fight is going to melt away when they see the plumes of those impossibly large and long-ranged shells spouting out of the water around them! If Thirsk is still in port, let the KH VIIs shell the water a mile behind him, and he can order his ships to strike as quickly as they can reach their flags! The whole city will be sitting on their roofs to watch the spectacle, so if Thirsk plays it smart and keeps his ships in view from shore, everyone will see why he struck - especially if he fires or skips a few hundred cannonballs across Gorath Bay and they fall a mile short! Heck, the KH VIIs can level the docks behind him just to pound home the futility of fighting back! Unfortunately I'm afraid that we're going to see at least one or more of his ships disappear in massive explosions as Charisian shells plunge through them and set off their magazines. Hundreds of men will die for nothing other than providing a fig leaf so Thirsk can surrender and rightfully state that if he didn't, he'd have lost every ship in his fleet - which he'll already know before the Cities and KH VIIs arrive. The EoC has a use for the RDN. If they sign a treaty that allows Dohlar to trade with South Harchong and the allies, then the Royal navy will be desperately needed to escort civilian convoys. Desnair will be more than happy to try to raid Dohlaran shipping and I'm sure Clyntahn will put offer a nice reward (that Duchairn will point out they can't afford!) to any captain who captures a Dohlaran merchant vessel. The Dohlaran merchant marine was stripped badly to fill out the ranks of the navy, so even with reduced crews, there probably aren't enough sailors in Dohlar to man the hulls available. Of course there isn't much to trade at the moment in non-war related goods, but Charis will work out a deal with Silkiah to use the Salthar canal, and a deal with South Harchong to open several of their ports to both Dohlar and the EoC. I sincerely hope that the ICN can either convince or force Dohlar to turn over the leadership responsible for sending their sailors to be tortured and murdered in Zion. It would do Dohlar a lot of good long-term to get rid of Clyntahn's toadies, and to make sure that none of them end up on the regency council. Getting rid of the Inquisition would be a healthy move as well. I'm sure Cayleb and Sharley wish they could dismantle the Dohlaran army, but they'll have to leave it in place so it can defend the country from the inevitable retribution for pulling out of the Jihad. There's a chance we could see the ICA fighting side-by-side with the Dohlarans inside Dohlar. I'm not sure if they'll leave Thirsk's wizard in place though. He could have a bright future working for Howsmyn, and any future inventions he comes up with should definitely not be shared with the Inquisition! "Oh bother", said Pooh as he glanced through the airlock window at the helmet he'd forgotten to wear. |
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by Sharp Claw » Mon Aug 15, 2016 12:00 am | |
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When Merlin tells Thirsk that time is pressing and he still has a long way to go tonight , it makes me wonder if Merlin's next move will be to visit Ahlvarez?
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by evilauthor » Mon Aug 15, 2016 2:36 am | |
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Eh, probably not. There's no prior connection or relationship between Alvarez and Merlin like there was with Thirsk. Even if the relationship with Thirsk amounts to nothing more than a single meeting, that's more than what Alvarez has. Also, Alvarez doesn't think his family got blown up and needs to be told otherwise. |
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by Peter2 » Mon Aug 15, 2016 6:13 am | |
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Hmp. That's the second time that snippets have started to arrive when I couldn't immediately get at them. But it really is nice to have them. Thank you, RFC!
I know second-guessing our esteemed First Sea Lord doesn't have a high success rate, but I'm going to guess that the most devious thing the EoC could do is leave Dohlar to declare neutrality, while notifying it that payment (in one way or another ) for their treatment of the Charisian POWs that fell into their hands would be required. After all, how long do you think Clyntahn would allow that state of affairs to continue? That way, Dohlar has to sort itself out, and may end up having to request Charisian intervention — which is a whole heap different from being invaded. . |
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by Randomiser » Mon Aug 15, 2016 6:47 am | |
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Yay Snippets! I had stopped visiting the forum regularly so just found it.
Random thoughts I think some posters are going a bit overboard with their own ideas and disregarding both general and specific background. NO way South Harchong is going to allow trade with a neutral Dohlar. SH are part of the most fanatically Temple Loyalist country on Safehold. So that idea is out. The future of the RDN fleet - the surviving ships will be joining the ICN as with every other defeated fleet we have seen. Why ever not? The ICN still has plenty of use for wooden sailing ships and resource problems about building enough of everything needed for the war. The only exceptions are where territories have become part of the EOC. For reasons posted by others that seems unlikely. You don't leave an active, organised, potentially hostile fleet behind you. Bishop Maik is a serious anomaly and may become a moral problem for Charis. I've never really understood how someone as seemingly reasonable as him got appointed to or has been allowed to remain in a post as sensitive as Intendant to the RDN. Clyntahn must have personally approved him after all. I suppose one solution would be that Maik is just more subtle than the other intendants, managing and manipulating Thirsk by appearing sympathetic, while concealing his real views; he has never actually done anything contrary to the church's real interests after all. But there isn't any textev at all for that viewpoint as far as I can see. Edit - On Thirsk's options/decisions - He takes his oath to King Ranahld seriously. However, if the King is not acting as a free agent in the interests of Dohlar but is clearly under coercion from the Inquisition in giving certain orders, what action does an oath to Ranahld require? I think the interview with Thirsk is really well done, and the irony of the freedom to do whatever he thinks is right being the 'deadliest gift of all' for Thirsk is just wonderful. Last edited by Randomiser on Mon Aug 15, 2016 7:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
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by Randomiser » Mon Aug 15, 2016 7:34 am | |
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I know the book has been turned in, but here are a couple of typos for the next edition. Not surprising given the rush.
"Of course they are , a voice said in the back of Thirsk’s brain. all, what’s a minor impossibility like that if he can be here at all?" "After all"? “I’m not here tonight only for Cayleb and Sharleyan on, My Lord. I have a message for you from someone else, as well.” The "on" is just extraneous. |
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by chrisd » Mon Aug 15, 2016 9:18 am | |
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Unless you are going to "hydroplane" then "Froude's Law" applies relating maximum speed to waterline length An approximate "hull speed" is given by 1.34 x √(waterline length) where the speed is in "knots" (6080 ft/hr) and the WL is in feet. (Please revise for Safehold Units if so desired) Last edited by chrisd on Tue Aug 16, 2016 12:36 am, edited 1 time in total.
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by PeterZ » Mon Aug 15, 2016 10:09 am | |
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Well Dennis, fast VIP transports could be something that other steel works could be working on. One suspects that her Highness Princess Irys in her capacity as Her Grace the Duchess of Darcos and daughter by marriage of the House of Ahrmahk will ask for and receive a significant portion of the gold backed zero coupon notes Cayleb will be issuing. Corisande has had a naval tradition and so having her nation develop their steel works into focusing on steam powered ocean going ships will be a natural. Sure, acquiring the skill to make Housmanized steel armor will take time. Yet, fast steamers do not require thick face hardened steel. They can use good quality steel plate. Heck, I bet Her Highness would encourage her ship yards to bypass wood framing altogether. Also, with regions known as Black Water, one would suspect that oil is abundant and easily available in the Princedom. Bottom line is fast transports are coming soon but not soon enough to be seen before the this story arc concludes. |
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