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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Louis R   » Sun May 15, 2016 10:43 pm

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Your assumption that the Temple Guard in Zion is completely loyal to the inquisition is as blyth as Clyntahn's - and equally well founded.

Which means you may both be mistaken: I've been thinking over the chain of events that brought Maj Phandys to our attention, and that little missive Vicar Hauwerd dropped on Rhobair.

I'm not sure what it means - Himself is holding this one pretty tightly, so far - but there are a few straws in the wind:

1. there are Guardsmen who are no happier with the pre-Jihad state of the Church than the Circle was. We've met one, and although he's retired, he still has links to the Guard, so I can't believe he's unique.

2. Hauwerd was himself a Guardsman, and would have been a natural center for that unhappiness. He was also not a trusting soul, and would have anticipated Clyntahn's response if he could ID the Circle. He may well have been taking steps to counter that response, but not have had time to get fully organised. There's also the fact that the situation with Charis made it possible for Clyntahn to make his response far more extreme than Hauwerd would initially have expected, so his plans _couldn't_ deal with it.

3. Nynian is an even less trusting soul. I would be very, very surprised [which means, of course, that in fact this is exactly what is going on ;)] if either of the Wylsyn brothers, or anybody associated with them, knew anything at all about the SSK, never mind Helm Cleaver. Nynian will always have considered the possibility of them being put to the Question even if it never crossed their minds. She may or may not have kept herself clear of anything Vicar Hauwerd might have been up to, but if she didn't she herself would have been the only point of connection with the SSK.

4. Vicar Rhobair is making plans with _somebody_, plans that don't involve a direct confrontation with Clyntahn and the Inquisition. That suggests that he doesn't think the balance of forces is in his favour [currently, at least]. I would not be surprised if those plans depended on contacts supplied by Hauwerd in that little note, since Rhobair doesn't strike me as having been particularly devious and conspiratorial in the past. At least, not by the standards current in the Vicarate.

Where does that take us? Dunno, but my reading is that it suggests that there is a substantial fraction of the Guard still in Zion who were Wylsyn loyalists, and who have transferred that loyalty to Duchairn. And that a number of them figure on Clyntahn's list of trusted agents.

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Silverwall wrote:Personally I see Clynthan as most likely being killed by the (in my opinion) inevitable coup by Duchairn and Magwair. It's very clear that while both are loyal to the church that neither feel that Clynthan's leadership of proceedings is actually improving the chance of victory for the Church.

Also consider that Magwair just had most of the disloyal subcommanders killed off for him by Nynian and her cronies and we have a reverse of what traditionally happens when a dictator feels the need to prop up his reigeme.

Clynthan's reigeme protection forces are rapidly getting killed off and in a face to face the temple guards still loyal to him will be overwhelmed by AoG or the properly trained Harchong forces.

Also such a coup could take a leaf from Merlins book and either break of suborn the church semaphore chains so Clynthan doesn't know the army is comming. A few key men suborned 1 step down the chain from Zion and the grand fornicator has no idea where the forces really are. They are totally dependant on the semaphore for information flow, there is very little done by messanger.
A few observations on your suppositions:

1. Clyntahn did not suffer from having a majority of his loyal sub-commanders killed off by either the Seijins or by Magwair. The Seijins killed a few dozen fanatics who'd particularly distinguished themselves in their brutality towards "heretics" and the unfortunates in the prison camps. There's no textev at all that Magwair has been offing the more fanatical of the CoGA army's leadership, although for the preservation of his own skin I'll agree that it's a good idea. After all, the Army of Glacierheart would still be functional and dangerous if its commander wasn't a Clyntahn toady. So you're certainly correct that Magwair and Duchairn are correct that the jihad would go better without Clyntahn's interference!

Of course Clyntahn won't hesitate to eliminate either of them if he feels it's necessary to preserve his own skin, and in the fantasy world he lives in, he might kill them even if they pose no danger to him at all.

2) As far as we know, the Temple Guard forces in and around Zion are all loyal to the Inquisition (or are members of it) so we shouldn't expect a coup from them.

Keep in mind that there are inquisitors embedded with every army unit, and no CoGA army would be so impious and move on Zion to express their unhappiness with Clyntahn personally, especially an army of fanatically loyal Harchongese. Magwair literally cannot order an army to attack the Temple Guard around Zion because that order would be unlikely to be obeyed. It would probably result in a bloodbath among the troops as some moved against the inquisitors embedded with them, while others rose to their defense.

Of course now that I've ruled out that possibility, RFC will promptly begin a civil war among the CoGA forces, or Phandys will finally do something, which we've been waiting for almost as long as we've waited for the ICN to sail into Gorath Bay in retribution for Dohlar turning the Charisian POWs over to the Inquisition in AMF! Barring a highly unlikely coup, I expect the Temple Guard around Zion will die when the ICN sails into Temple Bay and starts offloading the troops. A King Haarahld VII may not be able to sail up the Zion River to the Temple, (although it might...) but the City class ironclads certainly can! :twisted:

3) Much of the message traffic on the semaphore network is routinely encoded, so it wouldn't be possible to take over a station en route and alter the contents of the message traffic that passes through it - certainly not the military or church messages, which are all encoded. So it makes little difference whether a tower is suborned or blown up, although if a tower in each of the chains that lead to Zion stopped passing military messages, the resulting confusion would buy some time for whichever "enemy" force was approaching Zion.

So your proposal to suborn a tower does have some merit, if a delay of a few days or hours before the forces around Zion realize that something is wrong with the semaphore network is crucial. Unfortunately you'd have to capture/suborn a tower in almost every chain that ends in Zion, so it's far more feasible to blow up one or more towers in each chain instead.

Nice thinking out of the box there. Keep it up! ;)
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by BobG   » Mon May 16, 2016 9:42 am

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With regard to Rayno's motivation, one thing I haven't seen discussed here is the issue of competent Harchongian troops lead by a competent, somewhat "liberal" commander. I would think that much of the Harchongese nobility won't be happy when they discover how good the troops have become. If a million Harchongese serfs trained in combat and armed with rifles turned around and started heading west, transporting the supplies accumulated over the year, they could reach Harchong with a force that the forces guarding the Empire couldn't begin to face.

For that matter, if the present Harchong army commander lead them, he could take over and become effectively the new leader of Harchong, be it as Emperor, army commander, president for life, or whatever. The army would certainly follow him if he used them to free the serfs and put down the nobility - and it would even be less bloody (on one side) than an uprising by the serfs.

I would think that Rayno might be motivated to kill Clyntahn due to the threat to his and his family's personal holdings.

-- Bob G

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Nod, Clyntahn believes that Rayno couldn't replace him but Rayno may have reasons to disagree.

However here's a thought, in a normal situation Rayno couldn't take over Clyntahn's job.

But during the "Holy War" things could be different.

It's possible that in the "Laws" associated with the Holy War, that there are "emergency provisions" regarding replacement of high-ranking individuals.

The Church couldn't afford to leave the Grand Inquisitor position vacant for the time that the normal rules for choosing the next Grand Inquisitor would require.

So Rayno kills Clyntahn (obviously in such a manner that he's not caught).

The Holy War Rules allow the Grand Vicar to name somebody as "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

So instead of Rayno having to convince enough Vicars to name him Grand Inquisitor, Rayno only has to convince the Chancellor to have the Grand Vicar name him "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

I think Rayno would be able to arrange that. :twisted:
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Louis R   » Mon May 16, 2016 2:34 pm

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Only if it became a threat, and one that it looked like Clyntahn was promoting. In the mean time, unhappy as Rayno is with the precedent, he recognises that a Charisian victory would be a more immediate threat, and that the MHOGATA must become a modern army to prevent that.

I can't see Clyntahn promoting anything beyond settling the survivors of the Host in the lands they're about to conquer, and maybe granting de facto acknowledgement of their freedom. I'm sure that he's at least as aware as Rayno of the potential repercussions of them going home, and a place as rich as Siddarmark can't be left to rot. Not all of it, anyway [Old Province is probably slated to become his version of Armageddon Reef]. Since it would be rather surprising if the Rayno family holdings had contributed their full share of serfs to the Host that's a denoument that is likely to hurt their unfriends more
than themselves.

BobG wrote:With regard to Rayno's motivation, one thing I haven't seen discussed here is the issue of competent Harchongian troops lead by a competent, somewhat "liberal" commander. I would think that much of the Harchongese nobility won't be happy when they discover how good the troops have become. If a million Harchongese serfs trained in combat and armed with rifles turned around and started heading west, transporting the supplies accumulated over the year, they could reach Harchong with a force that the forces guarding the Empire couldn't begin to face.

For that matter, if the present Harchong army commander lead them, he could take over and become effectively the new leader of Harchong, be it as Emperor, army commander, president for life, or whatever. The army would certainly follow him if he used them to free the serfs and put down the nobility - and it would even be less bloody (on one side) than an uprising by the serfs.

I would think that Rayno might be motivated to kill Clyntahn due to the threat to his and his family's personal holdings.

-- Bob G

DrakBibliophile wrote:
Nod, Clyntahn believes that Rayno couldn't replace him but Rayno may have reasons to disagree.

However here's a thought, in a normal situation Rayno couldn't take over Clyntahn's job.

But during the "Holy War" things could be different.

It's possible that in the "Laws" associated with the Holy War, that there are "emergency provisions" regarding replacement of high-ranking individuals.

The Church couldn't afford to leave the Grand Inquisitor position vacant for the time that the normal rules for choosing the next Grand Inquisitor would require.

So Rayno kills Clyntahn (obviously in such a manner that he's not caught).

The Holy War Rules allow the Grand Vicar to name somebody as "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

So instead of Rayno having to convince enough Vicars to name him Grand Inquisitor, Rayno only has to convince the Chancellor to have the Grand Vicar name him "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

I think Rayno would be able to arrange that. :twisted:
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Peter2   » Mon May 16, 2016 6:39 pm

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I know that successfully second-guessing RFC is seldom done, but I'm still going to offer a hostage to fortune and say that I'm not sure that Rayno will kill Clyntahn. I've just been re-reading the end of sub-chapter X in the Chapter titled "July, Year of God 897" in HFQ, where Clytahn threatens to seize absolute control of the Temple and all its forces if he sees the likelihood that the jihad is going to be lost.

He is totally self-convinced that God will not allow this to happen. This is hubris if I ever saw it. And we all know what follows hubris. Nemesis. In other books RFC has written, I have found the ways in which the various ungodly have met their several dooms immensely satisfying. Think of the weeks of fearful nightmares that Pavel Young much have endured after Honor Harrington blew away his picked assassin. Think of how Varnaythus was forced to meet Wencit in hopeless combat after seeing all his plans crash down in ruin with the death of Anshakar.

I think an understated and unexpected pistol ball in the back of the head from a trusted subordinate would be a completely inadequate ending for the main villain of a series of nine books. I hope and believe that nemesis will demand a much much spectacular humbling of Clyntahn's dreams. However it turns out, I'm very much looking forward to it. 8-)
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Keith_w   » Mon May 16, 2016 9:54 pm

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Peter2 wrote:I think an understated and unexpected pistol ball in the back of the head from a trusted subordinate would be a completely inadequate ending for the main villain of a series of nine books. I hope and believe that nemesis will demand a much much spectacular humbling of Clyntahn's dreams. However it turns out, I'm very much looking forward to it. 8-)
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I think you have captured the essence of my feelings about it in this paragraph. Clyntahn will be dragged, drooling and ranting, completely lost to reality, before the victorious forces of the Empire, their emperor, and their empress.
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by shayvaan   » Mon May 16, 2016 10:36 pm

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Keith_w wrote:
Peter2 wrote:I think an understated and unexpected pistol ball in the back of the head from a trusted subordinate would be a completely inadequate ending for the main villain of a series of nine books. I hope and believe that nemesis will demand a much much spectacular humbling of Clyntahn's dreams. However it turns out, I'm very much looking forward to it. 8-)
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I think you have captured the essence of my feelings about it in this paragraph. Clyntahn will be dragged, drooling and ranting, completely lost to reality, before the victorious forces of the Empire, their emperor, and their empress.


I suppose it will depend on which nemesis gets him :D

Personally, I see him being given the "Oscar St. Just," retirement plan.
For those who don't think he would be suffering enough, consider the following:

1) Charis and Mab have already made him afraid, Rayno noted this. This is the worst thing that Clyntahn could suffer, because it is the result of the destruction of his entire world view (i.e. That there is no difference between his will and God's). The more defeats the COGA, and esp. the inquisition suffer, the worse this will become.

2) What Safehold truly needs is to heal. It can never begin that process as long as atrocities and vengeance continue. So to paraphrase Theisman, "Good-bye Mr. Grand Fornicator." <sound of gunshot>
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Kytheros   » Tue May 17, 2016 3:06 am

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McGuiness wrote:
Silverwall wrote:Personally I see Clynthan as most likely being killed by the (in my opinion) inevitable coup by Duchairn and Magwair. It's very clear that while both are loyal to the church that neither feel that Clynthan's leadership of proceedings is actually improving the chance of victory for the Church.

Also consider that Magwair just had most of the disloyal subcommanders killed off for him by Nynian and her cronies and we have a reverse of what traditionally happens when a dictator feels the need to prop up his reigeme.

Clynthan's reigeme protection forces are rapidly getting killed off and in a face to face the temple guards still loyal to him will be overwhelmed by AoG or the properly trained Harchong forces.

Also such a coup could take a leaf from Merlins book and either break of suborn the church semaphore chains so Clynthan doesn't know the army is comming. A few key men suborned 1 step down the chain from Zion and the grand fornicator has no idea where the forces really are. They are totally dependant on the semaphore for information flow, there is very little done by messanger.
A few observations on your suppositions:

1. Clyntahn did not suffer from having a majority of his loyal sub-commanders killed off by either the Seijins or by Magwair. The Seijins killed a few dozen fanatics who'd particularly distinguished themselves in their brutality towards "heretics" and the unfortunates in the prison camps. There's no textev at all that Magwair has been offing the more fanatical of the CoGA army's leadership, although for the preservation of his own skin I'll agree that it's a good idea. After all, the Army of Glacierheart would still be functional and dangerous if its commander wasn't a Clyntahn toady. So you're certainly correct that Magwair and Duchairn are correct that the jihad would go better without Clyntahn's interference!

Of course Clyntahn won't hesitate to eliminate either of them if he feels it's necessary to preserve his own skin, and in the fantasy world he lives in, he might kill them even if they pose no danger to him at all.


I believe you misunderstood what Silverwall meant by Maigwair's most "disloyal subcommanders" being killed off. I think he is referring to in Hell's Foundation Quiver's, when the Church in Zion is blown up during a meeting of carefully selected senior members of the Temple Guard and those members of the Vicarate and the Temple hierarchy involved in organizing and overseeing the Army of God - the participants were selected by and meeting at the direction of Clyntahn via Rayno.

I'd say Maigwair's most disloyal senior subordinates - the ones most likely to replace him as Captain General, the ones most likely to back Clyntahn over Maigwair, the ones most likely to support a push by Clyntahn to replace Maigwair with a supporter of Clyntahn's - got blown up and won't be in Maigwair's way if he tried to arrange something.
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by jgnfld   » Tue May 17, 2016 8:21 am

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Re. it being impossible to take over a semaphore station and pass false messages, it is VERY possible to do this.

2 points:

1. Encoding at the level the Church likely uses could easily be broken by OWL in real time.

Charis uses one time pads for high commanders, but that is likely because of Merlin. I have seen no evidence that these are in general use. Mathematically, I very much doubt Safeholdians would be sophisticated enough to come up with the necessary proofs. In our world one time pads were either a late 19th century or an early 20th Century invention depending on whether you believe the |US Patent Office or reality.

Even Charis could never use one time pads for greater amounts of communication. The logistics of managing them even in our world make their general use impossible.

2. There is a long history of using false, but correctly enciphered messages along a trusted channel to confuse the enemy. David Kahn records many of these in his monumental work, The Codebreakers.

In other words, it is actually well possible to place false traffic into the Church communication channels and in some ways I'm surprised it hasn't yet happened. That said, a really good time to do this is during a major invasion and one has not happened yet.
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by C. O. Thompson   » Tue May 17, 2016 4:08 pm

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BobG wrote:With regard to Rayno's motivation, one thing I haven't seen discussed here is the issue of competent Harchongian troops lead by a competent, somewhat "liberal" commander. I would think that much of the Harchongese nobility won't be happy when they discover how good the troops have become. If a million Harchongese serfs trained in combat and armed with rifles turned around and started heading west, transporting the supplies accumulated over the year, they could reach Harchong with a force that the forces guarding the Empire couldn't begin to face.

For that matter, if the present Harchong army commander lead them, he could take over and become effectively the new leader of Harchong, be it as Emperor, army commander, president for life, or whatever. The army would certainly follow him if he used them to free the serfs and put down the nobility - and it would even be less bloody (on one side) than an uprising by the serfs.

I would think that Rayno might be motivated to kill Clyntahn due to the threat to his and his family's personal holdings.

-- Bob G

DrakBibliophile wrote:
Nod, Clyntahn believes that Rayno couldn't replace him but Rayno may have reasons to disagree.

However here's a thought, in a normal situation Rayno couldn't take over Clyntahn's job.

But during the "Holy War" things could be different.

It's possible that in the "Laws" associated with the Holy War, that there are "emergency provisions" regarding replacement of high-ranking individuals.

The Church couldn't afford to leave the Grand Inquisitor position vacant for the time that the normal rules for choosing the next Grand Inquisitor would require.

So Rayno kills Clyntahn (obviously in such a manner that he's not caught).

The Holy War Rules allow the Grand Vicar to name somebody as "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

So instead of Rayno having to convince enough Vicars to name him Grand Inquisitor, Rayno only has to convince the Chancellor to have the Grand Vicar name him "temporary" Grand Inquisitor.

I think Rayno would be able to arrange that. :twisted:


Bob G... I think this was a point of discussion some months ago, at least to the degree that the million or so well trained, well armed surfs will likely become an issue but, just reading your comment in context with some of the other recent posts in this thread mad me wonder what Clynthan is likely to do when this becomes a prominent point for him. He has long had a sense of pride and security related to the Harchongese nobility but if there is a setback handed to the Mighty Hosts and they decide to go back home or change alliance, that might be the issue to cause him to stroke out
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Re: Rayno will kill Clyntahn!
Post by Isilith   » Tue May 17, 2016 7:35 pm

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McGuiness wrote:
Silverwall wrote:Personally I see Clynthan as most likely being killed by the (in my opinion) inevitable coup by Duchairn and Magwair. It's very clear that while both are loyal to the church that neither feel that Clynthan's leadership of proceedings is actually improving the chance of victory for the Church.

Also consider that Magwair just had most of the disloyal subcommanders killed off for him by Nynian and her cronies and we have a reverse of what traditionally happens when a dictator feels the need to prop up his reigeme.

Clynthan's reigeme protection forces are rapidly getting killed off and in a face to face the temple guards still loyal to him will be overwhelmed by AoG or the properly trained Harchong forces.

Also such a coup could take a leaf from Merlins book and either break of suborn the church semaphore chains so Clynthan doesn't know the army is comming. A few key men suborned 1 step down the chain from Zion and the grand fornicator has no idea where the forces really are. They are totally dependant on the semaphore for information flow, there is very little done by messanger.
A few observations on your suppositions:

1. Clyntahn did not suffer from having a majority of his loyal sub-commanders killed off by either the Seijins or by Magwair. The Seijins killed a few dozen fanatics who'd particularly distinguished themselves in their brutality towards "heretics" and the unfortunates in the prison camps. There's no textev at all that Magwair has been offing the more fanatical of the CoGA army's leadership, although for the preservation of his own skin I'll agree that it's a good idea. After all, the Army of Glacierheart would still be functional and dangerous if its commander wasn't a Clyntahn toady. So you're certainly correct that Magwair and Duchairn are correct that the jihad would go better without Clyntahn's interference!

Of course Clyntahn won't hesitate to eliminate either of them if he feels it's necessary to preserve his own skin, and in the fantasy world he lives in, he might kill them even if they pose no danger to him at all.

2) As far as we know, the Temple Guard forces in and around Zion are all loyal to the Inquisition (or are members of it) so we shouldn't expect a coup from them.

Keep in mind that there are inquisitors embedded with every army unit, and no CoGA army would be so impious and move on Zion to express their unhappiness with Clyntahn personally, especially an army of fanatically loyal Harchongese. Magwair literally cannot order an army to attack the Temple Guard around Zion because that order would be unlikely to be obeyed. It would probably result in a bloodbath among the troops as some moved against the inquisitors embedded with them, while others rose to their defense.

Of course now that I've ruled out that possibility, RFC will promptly begin a civil war among the CoGA forces, or Phandys will finally do something, which we've been waiting for almost as long as we've waited for the ICN to sail into Gorath Bay in retribution for Dohlar turning the Charisian POWs over to the Inquisition in AMF! Barring a highly unlikely coup, I expect the Temple Guard around Zion will die when the ICN sails into Temple Bay and starts offloading the troops. A King Haarahld VII may not be able to sail up the Zion River to the Temple, (although it might...) but the City class ironclads certainly can! :twisted:

3) Much of the message traffic on the semaphore network is routinely encoded, so it wouldn't be possible to take over a station en route and alter the contents of the message traffic that passes through it - certainly not the military or church messages, which are all encoded. So it makes little difference whether a tower is suborned or blown up, although if a tower in each of the chains that lead to Zion stopped passing military messages, the resulting confusion would buy some time for whichever "enemy" force was approaching Zion.

So your proposal to suborn a tower does have some merit, if a delay of a few days or hours before the forces around Zion realize that something is wrong with the semaphore network is crucial. Unfortunately you'd have to capture/suborn a tower in almost every chain that ends in Zion, so it's far more feasible to blow up one or more towers in each chain instead.

Nice thinking out of the box there. Keep it up! ;)



Ummm, what? No one said Magwair was. It WAS pointed out that Magwair had been given breathing room by having his most disloyal subordinates killed off FOR him. Or did you miss the big boom in Zion?
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