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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by McGuiness   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 7:11 am

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Adeon Hawkwood wrote:I'm leaning towards the "organize a coup" option (against the Church, not necessarily against the King). I think that there's no way Thirsk would take service with Charis, his loyalty to his country is to strong for that.

He might be willing to seek asylum in Charis, but I think that would be a last resort for him since it would mean abandoning the officers and men of the Dohlaran Navy (and Clyntahn would probably do a major purge of the navy to be on the safe side if Thirsk defects).

Given that I can definitely see him organizing a coup to move Dohlar to at least a neutral stance.
I largely agree - Thirsk won't switch sides and he won't be retiring to live out the rest of his life in the EoC with his family.

I think we were given a major hint of what was in store for Thirsk way back in OAR when Thirsk surrendered to Cayleb.

"I do feel sorry for Thirsk, though," Merlin said after a moment, his smile fading. "You were right when you said he deserved a better cause to serve."

"He'd be more likely to find one of those if he'd find a better king," Cayleb said tartly. "Trust me. That's something I know a little about."

"Yes, you do."


King Rahnyld of Dohlar was painted as a very different sort of ruler in HFQ than OAR, where he blithely sent his entire navy off to destroy another country merely to have the interest rate on his loans from Mother Church reduced. He was quite hands-on then, and now that his country is engaged in a jihad for the souls of men and has suffered severe defeats on land and sea, he's mentally checked out and is letting his advisers run the kingdom. Fine, if he wishes to act like he's abdicated, then abdicate, and let Thirsk, Ahlverez, Fern, and Maik serve on his son's regency council and let them sue for terms in order to preserve the kingdom! Otherwise the CoGA and the allies are going to crush it.

The ICN will soon be able to sink Dohlar's fleet, including all those screw galleys and the Thunderer they just captured. (I wish a couple of City class ironclads had been sent to the Gulf of Dohlar, but the Haarahlds will do nicely!) They'll lay waste to every port and waterfront, and destroy Dohlar's commercial fleet as well. Hanth, (who was recently reinforced so I'm betting he got the latest 50,000 troops from Chisholm) is battering at Dohlar's eastern border, and his men are better armed and trained than the RDA by far. Plus he has actual ICA troops with him now, and DE can sweep down to help finish the job this winter to keep his troops busy. (Which is what I expected him to do...)

The CoGA is trying to keep an iron boot on the neck of the nations of Safehold, but to paraphrase Princess Leia, the harder Clyntahn tries to crush Safehold to do his bidding, the more countries will slip through his fingers. The only thing keeping Dohlar in the jihad right now is the wolf baying at the door (Hanth) and the hope that their navy might make a difference. That fleet is about to find out that it's completely obsolete and impotent. A single Haarahld VII can defeat every other ship on the planet, and a couple of City class ironclads could destroy the entire Dohlaran navy.

So what will Dohlar do when military defeat is only months away? It needs to cut a deal as quickly as possible, or it will find itself becoming the new SW provinces of Siddarmark or the first mainland member of the EoC. (Which isn't a bad deal once the allies win the war. Expect Silkiah to join the EoC for exactly that reason.) Rahnyld has checked out mentally and his country needs him to abdicate, which is an area where I suspect Thirsk will play a part...

Merlin isn't going to give him the Big Reveal. He may explain that the ICN currently has ironclads attacking Desnair, and that even more powerful vessels will soon be sailing in Dohlar's direction, and this time they're not going to stop until they reach Gorath. Merlin will explain what they'll do to Dohlar's infrastructure and navy so Thirsk understands that the clock is ticking. (I don't expect great detail here, just a warning that Thirsk's fleet and country cannot hope to stand against the ships that are on their way.)

In the past I'm on record as stating that the second Thirsk's family disappeared, he was a dead man - although having them killed in church custody obviously modifies how long the Clyntahn will let him live. I've also said that if the Inquisition took him or his family to Zion, he'd feel that Mother Church has broken her oaths with him, that his King has broken his oath to protect him, and all that leaves is his oaths to the navy and loyalty to his country. I expect Charis would like him to continue to fill his role as the commander of the Dohlaran fleet, mostly so it will surrender as quickly as possible when complete destruction looms due to the arrival of the King Haarahlds. Cayleb & Co. don't want the body count any higher than it needs to be, inquisitors excepted, so getting the Dohlaran navy to strike its colors without having to sink half of it would be a Very Good Idea. Plus Dohlar is going to need that navy to keep the forces of the CoGA at bay. That's Thirsk's first responsibility.

His second is to his country, and he can fulfill that best by encouraging Dohlar to sue for terms as quickly as possible. Waiting until next summer may be far too late, since the Haarahlds will arrive by Spring and Hanth is already pounding down the door.

Yes, Thirsk is still on a knife edge, but he's also a figure whose triumphs and personal tragedies make him the most respected man in Dohlar. except among the Inquisition of course. I suspect that Merlin will try to convince him to use that popularity. To quietly advise his captains that he won't consider it "defeatism" to strike their colors if faced by a new type of Charisian ship which they can't defeat. (One of the City class ironclads could have taken out the entire Dohlaran fleet, so the Haarahlds aren't the only thing to worry about.) To talk to Ahlverez and work out a united front for both the army and navy. "Get us out of the jihad before our country is overrun and destroyed!"

I don't know if they could manage it, since Ahlverez has the usual cloud of defeat looming over his head at the moment, despite his competence. Their political enemies may destroy them, although some of Ahlverez's supporters are Thirsk's enemies, hence my proposed united front. The CoGA would certainly try to arrest or assassinate Thirsk, but he can remain safely aboard ship if necessary, and I don't think most Dohlarans would be too upset if open season on inquisitors were declared if the Inquisition tried a massive crackdown. A large broadsheet campaign would be helpful should that happen! :P

Dohlar is simply going to have to break ties with the Church of Clyntahn, or like Desnair simply ignore all orders from Zion. Right now the church is ruling it, and that needs to stop before there's no Dohlar left to save!

Keep in mind that Dohlar is geographically more isolated than most people think. It borders on Siddarmark and Silkiah, and most of the country is surrounded by mountains and water. So if it sues for peace and the allies, aided by the Dohlaran navy can keep the MHoG from invading to force it to remain in the fold, there's no way for the CoGA to stop Dohlar from going its own way, and clearly Thirsk could have a major role in that.

I look forward to his conversation with Merlin with great anticipation! ;)

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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Henry Brown   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 10:46 am

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Bosparan wrote:Just wondering, but ... anybody else find it mighty convenient that there was that accident that delayed the King Harald ships?

*****SNIP*****


Ok, so in HFQ Howsmyn estimates that the accident at Delthak will set back production of the KH VIIs somewhere between 3 to 5 months. Does anybody remember what month the original completion date was scheduled for? Just trying to figure out what the revised timetable for them is.
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Sharp Claw   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 11:04 am

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Great post McGuiness but I disagree on one point. I think Merlin will reveal the truth to Thirsk and possibly to Ahlvarez and Maik or Fern as well. If those Dohlarans are going to pull off a successful coup against the inquisition dominated Dohlaran government, they will need every unfair advantage the snarcs can give them. A variation on the Merlin sees visions story is not enough because the time lag of visions to using the information is too great for a fast moving coup attempt.

Thirsk is at a low point in his life now and there is some risk that revealing the truth might push him to suicide, but I don't see Thirsk as the suicidal type, given a reasonable alternative. The knowledge that his family is alive and safe and the possibility of saving his country and navy from Clyntahn and a disastrous defeat in the jihad should be more than enough reasons for Thirsk to want to live and fight.

The same applies to Ahlverez and Thirsks other potential political allies. What form a new government would take in Dohlar is less certain. Abdication by King Rahnayld and the formation of a regency council around his son, a ruling council with a figurehead King or an outright republic, like Siddarmark are all possibilities. We have heard about King Rahnaylds son but know nothing about him. If the son is as stupid as the father there would be little point in forming a regency council only to put another idiot on the throne in a few years.

While the inquisition dominated church and government seem all powerful now the Dohlaran people are fearful and very much ready for a change. The armed forces united under Thirak and Ahlverez could definitely unite the Dohlaran people to make that change. A few executions/assassinations of key inquisitors and their supporters in the Dohlaran government should send the rest fleeing for their lives and Thirsk and his allies could then take over the country and take it out of the jihad.
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by PeterZ   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 11:04 am

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Henry Brown wrote:
Bosparan wrote:Just wondering, but ... anybody else find it mighty convenient that there was that accident that delayed the King Harald ships?

*****SNIP*****


Ok, so in HFQ Howsmyn estimates that the accident at Delthak will set back production of the KH VIIs somewhere between 3 to 5 months. Does anybody remember what month the original completion date was scheduled for? Just trying to figure out what the revised timetable for them is.


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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Henry Brown   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 11:48 am

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PeterZ wrote:
Henry Brown wrote:Ok, so in HFQ Howsmyn estimates that the accident at Delthak will set back production of the KH VIIs somewhere between 3 to 5 months. Does anybody remember what month the original completion date was scheduled for? Just trying to figure out what the revised timetable for them is.


July


Thanks. So based on that, they should only be a few months out as of the end of HFQ. We should definitely see them in the next book.
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Dathi   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 12:19 pm

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Bosparan wrote:Just wondering, but ... anybody else find it mighty convenient that there was that accident that delayed the King Harald ships?

I mean, here we are close to finishing them and then they just get pushed back into the next book. With this book just ending with a certain admiral who's probably about to switch sides.
Here we are about to get a few new ships (which will need an admiral) and here we are about to get an admiral (who'll probably need something to do).
hm.......

And wouldn't it be poetic irony, if the man who built the Dolaran navy got to be the man who smashed it?

Then again, I'd love to read Clynthan's tirade when he get's the news ...

1) Thirsk won't join Charis, I'm pretty sure. Too much loyalty to his country.
2) people keep saying his King betrayed him? It was the Inquisition that forced him to hand over prisoners, right? I don't remember the king being involved.
3) One possibility for Thirsk is he makes a loud and public denunciation of the Go4, and then disappears.
4) my best guess for disappearing is he takes a single-person sailboat out, with a case of whiskey and the boat is discovered abandoned with most of the whiskey gone. (His binge drinking at the end of the book would make this plausible.) NB: this happens whether or not he makes a public statement before he goes.
5) No way are the Brotherhood going to let an opponent nation in on the secret. Fern, for instance, might well sell the secret to the Inquisition in exchange for them backing out of Dohlar.
6) Dohlar declaring neutrality (de facto or de jure) seems possible - IF they can be assured that the AoG won't steamroller them over.
7) Given the position of Thorast, I don't see how Thirsk can be part of the semi-coup that leads to 6. Now, if Thorast can be turfed out, maybe.
8) However, I doubt Dohlar's changing sides anytime soon. If they did, what's the point of the King Harald class?
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Expert snuggler   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 12:22 pm

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Thirsk is as loyal as a dog. The only way he could swallow the Reveal is if someone gave him a way to believe that the Church was a truth even if built upon a lie and still worthy of service (and "If wrong to be set right").
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Henry Brown   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 12:51 pm

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Expert snuggler wrote:Thirsk is as loyal as a dog. The only way he could swallow the Reveal is if someone gave him a way to believe that the Church was a truth even if built upon a lie and still worthy of service (and "If wrong to be set right").


Thirsk is loyal to the Kingdom of Dohlar, not to the CoG. In fact, from all available text-ev in recent books he is fed up with the Inquisition. So I don't think it is out of the question that he could swallow the Reveal.

However, I agree with all the posters above that he will not switch sides. He might decide to flee Dohlar in order to be with his family, especially if the Inquisition decides to move against him. But he will not take service with the ICN against his homeland. He'll just sit out the rest of the fighting. So based on this, I don't see the Inner Circle nominating him for membership. There is just no point is risking a reveal on a man who is sitting out the rest of the war.

Now if the Inquisition was to decide to move against Dohlar Sword of Scheuler style then all bets are off. I could see Thirsk helping to lead the resistance in order to save his kingdom. In this type of scenario, I could see him possibly being admitted to the Inner Circle.
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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by n7axw   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 1:38 pm

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No, Merlin's conversation with Thirsk won't bring him into the inner circle. That would be vastly premature at this point. Merlin has observed that Thirsk is a man whose faith goes to the bone, much like Gray Harbor and Pine Mountain. There may well never be a time for Thirsk. But you certainly don't tell Thirsk the story while Dohlar is in the enemy camp.

As a speculative matter, I would think that the conversation between Merlin and Thirsk would cover the following:

Inform him that his family is safe and beyond the inquisition's reach and that they will be traded honorably. Textev suggests that Thirsk already trusts Cayleb to be honorable.

Point out that there is a valid distinction between God and the church and the church cannot claim to be representing God while she acts dishonorably and deceitfully.

Suggest that his oaths to his king are mutual. Not only does a liegeman have an obligation to serve his lord, but the lord also has an obligation to provide protection to his liegeman.

Offer him a way to join his family. Point out what he knows, that without the leverage provided by his family, the inquisition will probably kill him.

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Re: [Spoiler] The final chapter
Post by Expert snuggler   » Sun Oct 18, 2015 2:51 pm

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Henry Brown wrote:Thirsk is loyal to the Kingdom of Dohlar, not to the CoG. In fact, from all available text-ev in recent books he is fed up with the Inquisition. So I don't think it is out of the question that he could swallow the Reveal.


He has no illusions about the Inquisition but he's still loyal to the idealized Church that no longer exists except in his imagination and childhood memories.

He could be a Reformist. He is already in spirit. Where, though, has he shown the sort of emotional flexibility that would be required to believe that the Archangels were frauds? What could overcome his lifetime of defense mechanisms against letting doubt enter his mind?
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