Tonto Silerheels
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n7axw wrote:
I am not completely sure about the answer to this, but I have the impression that the winning side had full access to the tech base and the losers didn't.
That might explain part of it. I'm trying to put together a chronolog of events, and approximate durations. First, Shan-wei meets with Langhorne at Zion and hints that she's unwilling to accept that Safeholdians will never know their heritage. She then returns to the Alexandria enclave.
Second and shortly after, Langhorne launches a kinetic strike against the Alexandria enclave, killing Shan-wei, and most of the people in Alexandria. The kinetic strike came from an orbital bombardment system that Langhorne caused to be created, hiding it from the head of his own military contingent.
Third, things start to heat up in Zion to the point that it's obvious that there is going to be a struggle between the archangels. Kau-yung responds by setting a number of events in motion, including recording a message to Nimue Alban, and arranging for a wake-up call. Another angel, probably on Langhorne's side, visits a settlement on the Southern shore of Lake Pei to warn of the coming conflict. While there, Kau-yung detonates a nuclear device killing Langhorne, Bédard, and most of Langhorne's other followers, which the angel witnesses.
Fourth, the remnants of the anti-technology group struggle for a period of about eighty years against the remnants of the pro-technology group. The pro-technology group comprises Shan-wei's followers and Kau-yung's followers. Shan-wei's followers are the terraforming people and others were were openly opposed to Langhorne. Kau-yung's followers are military people who, while opposed to Langhorne, ostensibly supported him. The anti-technology group create seijin to help in their struggle. The pro-technology group create demons to help in theirs.
Fifth, the struggle goes badly for the anti-technology group, but something happens allowing them ultimately to win the conflict. The winners 'sanitise' the records, casting the struggle as one of good against evil.
Sixth, with time, all in the anti-technology group die off. The governmental and religious systems they set in place become corrupt.
Seventh, Nimue receives Kau-yung's wake-up call.
I have a few problems with this chronolog. One, how old Kau-yung appeared to be to Nimue. According to this, he was older by the amount of time it took between her personality being recorded until Kau-yung's arrival on Safehold, plus the time to terraform Safehold, plus a small amount of time for the conflict to come to a head. Recall that Kau-yung received anti-gerone treatments, so his physical appearance should advance slowly. It appears to me that the bombing of Zion (now I'm on the NSA's watchlist) had to occur quite a while after the destruction of Alexandria (now I feel as though I'm discussing the relative merits of amillennialism, premillennialism, and postmillennialism).
Two, the reversal of fortunes in the war against the fallen is unexplained. Since Kohdy said that things were going badly, we know that things were going badly after the anti-technology group created seijin. Thus, the creation of seijin cannot explain the reversal. And for the same reason, neither can the access to technology.
Three, in the tradition of Rick Perry, I forget the third thing.
Four, the anti-technology group has access to an orbital bombardment system. The OBS should trump anything the pro-technology group has, unless they have something equivalent in power. They must have, because they have the advantage in the war at some late date despite the pro-technology group's possession of the OBS and seijin, (What's the plural of seijin, anyway?), and because the anti-technology group is forced to increase its defenses during the war.
~Tonto
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