There is also a substantial misapprehension, which is by no means unique to Dilandu, I've noticed, about the courses of the "Scientific" and "Industrial" "revolutions" and how they interacted. I'll spare you the 10-page essay I was starting to compose, and simply point out that it wasn't very much at all - and most of it in the direction of Science, at that.
Randomiser wrote:A whole lot of this is about whether you want RFC to write best selling novels that put food on the table and support his family or an economic/technological history book about the industrialisation of Safehold, which might sell about 1000 copies.
I think the background thinking is there, in much greater depth than many other post-apocalyptic style books, but as the developments widen there is less room to show us the detailed argument for every step of the process. RFC already gets slated for the number and length of infodumps.
Another aspect of this is that Dilandu seems to me to have a particularly fixed and inflexible view of how industrialisation must occur, and what value judgements the Inner Circle must take about their priorities and to be unwilling to accept that RFC's different viewpoint may have any merit nor to suspend disbelief for the sake of the plot.