To: Honourable Sir Dahvydd Wybyr, The Royal and Imperial Historian of Safehold
Greetings
runsforcelery wrote:I'm sorry you feel the ICN is run by idiots. Of course, you have the advantage of a little insight no one on Safehold has, don't you?
Just so I'm not misunderstood, in case my words seemed to imply things which I most certainly didn't even think, much less wanted to say...
One of reasons I read your books (a lot) is that you do try to do a proper job of making it plausible. So, unlike in the case of writers who don't even care and their stories have so many holes there's no point in discussing them... for your worlds (and that's what they are, much more than mere stories) we, as readers, do care.
And so I poke holes in the story - or try to - because you did make it a real world, at least in our minds, and I do care about the future of Safehold
runsforcelery wrote:The Inner Circle was aware that the threat of commerce-raiders was growing, but the ICN's convoy tactics had been fully adequate over the last several years. You do not go around planting explosives aboard your own vessels "just in case" under those circumstances, nor do you ask your personnel to blow themselves up to prevent capture. They may choose to blow themselves up if something catastrophic happens, but that's rather a different proposition.
Eh, I was re-reading Honorverse while waiting for HFQ or at least for more snippets, and... there were the scuttling charges.
So when I saw this snippet, my first thought was about them.
runsforcelery wrote:Why should they? Aside from denying the enemy the opportunity to experiment with a few thousand rifles, what would they accomplish? And what good will it do the other side to experiment with them in the dozen weeks or so they have before they get real, hands-on field experience with that those rifles can do?
Oooh, now that's some significant info
(no, not sarcastic in any way. now we have a peek into the future... snippet #50 or so
)
A dozen weeks or so from the snippet #9 to when M96 are used for the first time
And yes, you're right. In that time frame, no chance in hell that the Temple can (re)produce them.
Or even formulate a tactic to defend against them. Especially with how the Inquisition has been hiding info from their own people (high-angle guns come to mind)
runsforcelery wrote:Will it be a bad thing if people like the Dohlarans (or even the Desnarians) who are already worried that ths jihad may be lost get direct, personal, hands-on confirmation that it is . . . and why? No, it won't. I'm not suggesting that the Charisians deliberately set out to hand those rifles over to the enemy. I'm simply pointing out that the "Ohmigod! What a catastrophe! thinking I seem to be seeing out of some people may be just a tad . . . excessive.
True, although (for that same reason) the Inquisition will try to control access to that info.
runsforcelery wrote: to the front for mass use against the enemy in the field, where examples are bound to be captured anyway.
True, and I didn't even think about that.
runsforcelery wrote:As for the vulnerability of the convoy, see my first paragraph above. The attack came as a complete surprise to the convoy commander, and the strength of the attack came as a surprise to the inner circle, and no navy has enough warships lying around to go assigning double or triple overkill to counter threats that are outside their intelligence appreciations.
Ok, but I have to ask this:
This was a convoy from
Tellesberg to
Siddar City.
Now, that seems to me to be rather far away from
Desnair, and the route isn't clear and simple either.
It implies that Desnairians sent a... if not quite a fleet, practically a small task force,
runsforcelery wrote: half of them navy ships, not just privateers
and in sufficient numbers to swarm a ICN convoy with an escort, all the way from Desnair to...where?
The convoy was going from Tellesberg through Howell Bay and Charis Sea (the only way, up to that point).
Now, if going to Siddar City, they probably didn't turn into the Darcos Sound (granted, I'm not an expert in weather patterns on Safehold).
So, the route from there is probably Emerald Reach --> The Anvil --> Markovian Sea --> Siddar City.
Where could the Desnairian raiding task force pass without being noticed?
Sea of Justice through the Tarot Channel and the Gulf of Tarot? With Tarot already being a part of the Charisian Empire?
Ok, the Tarot channel is probably much wider in real-life than on the map, so maybe... but they'd have to do it without being noticed by any ICN ships, and we're not talking about a single Desnairian schooner.
On the other side, I most definitely do not know much about sailing, so, it's possible... but it would mean Desnairian privateers got more courage than I gave them credit for.
Maybe the money they can get for such prizes makes them take insane chances? (And, after all, it's not like Charisians will put them to Question and Punishment if they're caught).
The prize money for the cargo described here, in an empire with gold mines yet too low tech base to produce such weapons, should be huge.