However, some problems:
Ten inch naval guns are not small the biggest made were eighteen inches. Heavy things too. The space forward will have the optical range finder tale for calculations, yada, yada. Thus the staked tail carriage rotating around the ammunition elevator, added some drawings and refined it a bit:
But why ALL the barrei is forward to the rotation axis? The reloading still would be able only on constant agnle of elevation. Look at this guns for example:
http://www.cityofart.net/bship/hms_roya ... gundia.gif
They are 13.5" from "Rpyal Sovereing", and you could see, that their barbettes is much more compact. They simply put all the reloading systems on the OTHER side of rotating axis. Of course, this is a fixed-train reloader, but even the rotation reloader may be more compact, colleague. Currently your mounts is awfuly heavy, and a lot of armor weight is used just to protect the empty space.
My attempt at the King Harold got to add the 8"/40s yet but have the 4"/45s and 10"/40s 3 stacks, basket mast with nice gazebo for the look outs and the black flag with gold Kraken
1)Too low sides. Probably not a big problem in Safehold current situation, but RFC is pretty firm about the ability to operate effectively in heavy seas.
2) The forward mast would be destroyed by any storm. The geodesical mast look different. Try to find something as example on Shipbucket.
3)All pipes are on the rear. If all the boilers are on the rear, so where is the machines? In front of the boilers? The long shafts isn't really good thing; sometimes they are unavoidable, but they are always hard to work with.
It would be good to make sides of your ship a one deck higher, place some superstructure or the flying deck over the weather desk. The pipes must be rearranged forward, to make space for machines.
Still, a good work!