PeterZ wrote:n7axw wrote:
Hi Peter,
The foundations may crumble, but they are still really all we have to speculate on. My own record in picking up on unexpected twists and turns is exacty 0%. I was caught completely out on Ashes of Victory. There I've admitted it!
The arc of the story seems clear though. Charis starts off alone. Then with Merlin's assistance she survives, but still a tiny percentage of the world's population and resources. Then through a combination of persuasion, marriage and conquest, she is strenthened as her percentage of people and resources improves. Now a major mainland nation, Siddarmark is by alliance in her camp. In the meantime, her tech through innovation and Merlin's assistance continues to improve.
That is the arc of the story. Will there be twists and turns? Yep. Will I sucessfully pick up on them? Given my percentage, in all likelihood, no (sigh).
Don
Excellent summation, Don! We do need to add one or two important points. First, Charis' prime enemy is correct in what it accuses Charis of. Second, Charis' enemies have been taught to build their society upon lies. These two points have to be addressed and they can muddy the plot waters pretty thoroughly.
I suspect that the story arc so far aschewed these points to address the low hanging plot fruit; the means Charis has to defend itself against the liars. By surviving the liars' aggression Charis highlights the inconsistencies generated by the great lie. That's fine as far as it goes. It just strikes me that assuming that state of affairs will continue is very much like any Elvis Santino threat appraisal. It assumes too much.
That the limits in Charisian resources will continue to be overcome through alliances and more rapid productivity increases than its enemies might be assumptions that are insupportable. Good strategists will plan for as many ways as they can to overcome those limits in resources as additional layers. Sort of like Nimue's PICA and Shan-wei's seedlings.
There is a ceiling on how developed the tech can become without electricity. Yet beneath that ceiling the potential for exploring what they already have and finding new applications for it are almost limitless.
Something I would like to see explored is the relationship between culture and industrialization. Less than a third of earth's people live in industrialized societies. Why? What hinders the others? How might considering this help us predict which parts of Safehold will industrialize?
This discussion probably deserves a separate thread of its own.
Don