MrZero
Lieutenant (Junior Grade)
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Joined: Tue Nov 15, 2016 1:21 am
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-I thought Clynton was going to trick, then lock Merlin into a brick-wall tower that was really (random archangel)'s escape rocket to the moon. Merlin would be trapped, no way back, no way to do anything but sit there and try to figure out how to avoid detection from the Evil Eye in the Sky's BAD side. -Lost spaceship. After all that had been done in the settlement of SH, there's probably a Federation build spaceship somewhere in the SH star system. It's only the type used for wandering around the system rather than going to another solar system, but what's ON it? -Sejins on steam-powered penny-bicycles, fighting giant slash lizards. There's been a lot of sweeping drama but not enough main characters desperately trying to survive combat. -Weber will likely kill some more main B characters, especially amongst the Charisians. Like Edward Houseman the engineer. -More robots. We know that Owl can build a PICA, though he's all out of exotic material (oh gosh, what's this behind a tapestry in the Temple, a door?) Normally, what could Owl do if he only had to build a steel and nano-chip android? -For that matter, we only got a look at very little of the Temple. Whatever happened to Langhorn's living quarters? Where were the official angel-class flying cars kept? -Payment. What about the Church's shaky money situation? Will Charis pay off the Temple's debts? What will they ask for? -Mining. It was previously mentioned that Merlin was mining things by remote drone himself. If Merlin has his own kingdom-sized treasury, does he really need to run everything past the Inner Circle? What will they do when they're cut out of the loop and not have input on everything? -There was a lot of "one-mention and never returned to" stuff that I'm sure can surprize people. In book 9 Clynton gave an order to arrest all Dhollarans. But where do you _put_ them? Finally giving some information about the Inquisition door-breakers really helped flesh out the story of Zion. (almost painful to read, the naivety being almost as bad as the torture) - I'm surprized they didn't try Clyntan for braking church laws. Like how Harrington's military court tried the prison guards on the prison planet for breaking their own laws. (Hid it in the "contingency plans". did he? Yes, the c-plans from an entirely different book.) Yes, they mentioned doing that, but it was over in a paragraph and it didn't sink in for the characters. Clynton defending himself would have been interesting, to say the least. But I can easily accept that Weber just doesn't have that sort of Insane Troll Logic insanity in him. It would have been very... quotable at least! Clynton had three months, didn't he write anything down? It's 2016 and Hitler's "Mein Kampf" or however you spell it is still being passed around. -As much as I'd have liked a "few" examples of various things going wrong for the AOG at the hands of Merlin "I've got all the right paperwork and I'm here to collect your company's firearms while we're behind the front lines. They're to be taken back for advanced rifiling. Just put them in the cart and I'll come back tomorrow." not enough went wrong for the AOG. And wow it feels strange to admit that. Let me explain- There were always people who we didn't get to see. Interesting scenes that the aside paragraphs talked around. Which was why brief moments spent with Earl of Golden Tree? (the only one to have survived the shelling of his command bunker, and all of his personal possessions and staff he served with for two years gone) was so interesting. For example early in book 9 a field sargent (or something) had arranged for his platoon to all have a hot meal when they come back from the rainy and dark patrol. The AOG supply lines are talked about endlessly elsewhere, underscoring how such a rare event as good hot food on the front line would be. We hadn't, and for the entire series haven't, gotten to see the cook's reactions to hearing that the entire platoon was killed. All of them. What would their reaction be, surrounded by empty benches and full tables? Again, I guess Weber isn't that cruel. -Where the money was. And another one was the Temple had been receiving revenues for hundreds of years. And that's all we had heard about it. Just put it in a box and put it over there. At the start of Safehold, back in Armageddon Reef, what was the treasury like? After 800 years how difficult was it getting to find new places to put their stored money? Treasury officials can't admit to having too much money, after all! They have a holy Church to run! Were they just stacking boxes in the back room? Had they had to abandon the breakroom in the 5th century to the effort? Had there been successive generations of digging in an effort to find more places to put more boxes of gold? And how did the staff take the reversal, what was it like for them to enter a situation where they're wheeling out the gold the same hour that they've received it? What sort of experience for them was it like to enter rooms, one after another, that hadn't been entered in hundreds of years? To take away the church's sacred monetary reserves, to slowly _empty_ them? -Flammable Victory. Now that Charis has won and they basically get to tell everybody what to do, what about the Gababa objectives? It doesn't matter what the SH'ers believe as long as Merlin gets to shut down the Platform and deal with the Temple Mystery. So we're very likely to see the Platform fire. It's likely that Charis or Chisholm is going to get a crater instead of a castle, and more main characters will die. -Penny Dreadfuls. Everybody's got a printing press around here! But what sort of things are they printing? What Church(Inq.) approved tales will be told about the brave men on the battlefield? What sort of Merlin-made books are being sold in Charis? (straight out of a subfolder in Owl's database)'Could be anything from Armageddon Reef to TinTin graphic novels.. And Thanatos has a point, they could package the Earth Truth as a sci-fi novel. Merlin should have been leaflet-dropping THAT around the Temple lands since book two! -Steampunk written by a ships and swords writer. It's always fun to see a writer write what he doesn't want to write, just to see how many ways around under and over he can think up. If what Weber really wants to write is say, the Spanish naval attack on England, how does he write that when everybody's adding gaskets and cogs to everything they can. Charis taking over the Temple lands isn't going to be as confusing for the people as the Delthak Works taking over all those shoddy underfunded manufacturies. With so many new ways to power things (wind! water! steam! hydrogen!) how are the "yesterday the most complicated thing we knew about was axes and horses and this little motor thing is SO AWESOME" mainlanders going to take it? -Insufficiently nailed down. A great war leaves the country with three armies — an army of cripples, an army of mourners, and an army of thieves. ~German Proverb. We've been let in on all those casualty totals, but what about the simple hurt feelings of the people? All those "We hiked for a hundred days hauling this cannon. And now I'm going to keep it!" "We actually managed to kill a Charisian and by god I'm keeping this gear!" "To think we used to use these nets for fishing instead of collecting a fortune in busted ship-wood. Oh, what's this?" "Say, no-one will mind if I take this off of this body. Wait, why is it blinking a little light?" "No-one will mind if I take this copper-bottom wreck and make myself a really big parabolic mirror. And now I can hear the voice of god on my fillings." "I used to be a somebody! I used to be an Inquisition big shot! Now I'm a street-corner preacher. And NOW I've got a CHAINSAW!" etc. This could lead to a lot of little things in the wonderfully wrong hands and a few people "Chosen to fight Zur and the Ko-Dan Armada."
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