Concerning 'stilted':
I have thought about the characterization issue in DWs books - compared to for instance George RR Martin - a couple of times because the differences are highly insteresting. The more so because both of them are among my fav authors.
Martin's characters are more colorful, Weber's more 'straightforward' IMO.
However I have come to the conclusion that at least a part of the difference results from their different ways of storytelling. DWs stories are
plot-driven and his characters act (mostly) logically within the framework of the plot and background set of rules. That is an advantage in a certain way because we as readers don't feel cheated out of a logical plot progression because of some random foolishness of someone.
Martin's story seems to be more
character-driven which gives him more room to explore the depths of the human psyche (and actually demands it).
That is cool also though in a totally different way. It does lead to things like the Red Wedding. Suddenly the story gets turned upside down - and in big part because some hero is too young and hormone-laden to behave prudently. I guess we would hate that in the Honorverse, haha.
One can like both ways of storytelling but they are very different.
npadln wrote:I think it is important for this film's success that it separate itself somehow from other films of its genre (I doubt it will have the budget and talent of the other major studios). There are creative ways around that however. So, I don't know about others but I feel DW's strengths are NOT his characterizations. The interplay between characters comes off as stilted and not warm. But that can be a strength.
One idea to get around that is to embrace a cool dispassionate, alternative way of telling the story and present it like one of those classic second world war documentary series, where there is, first, a narrator describing the essence and state of affairs
over on-going battle clips, then second, expert talking heads and finally some first hand accounts by "old timer vets" from the battles. It is a great way to overcome budget obstacles and be selective where in a movie money has to be spent. It also presents many opportunities, as well as hurdles, for a director to create something unique and buzz worthy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZAsXB73TXSc